[6/17/2006]
This is the pencil artwork for the comic that I was originally going to run instead of this one. The comic was supposed to go like this:
Notes
“text” = speech
= thoughts
*text* = setting and actions
Panel 1:
*Lesser Demon’s co-worker, Lesser Demon, and J-san walking, in that order from right to left from the reader’s point of view*
Lesser Demon’s co-worker: “Hang a left, hang a left…”
Panel 2:
Lesser Demon’s co-worker: “Which way was left again?”
Panel 3:
J-san: *Holds hands out in front of him (see random floating hand in picture for hand position)*
Panel 4:
J-san: *points to his left (reader’s right)* “That way.”
Lesser Demon:
This comic was canceled for a few reasons:
1) The joke is awkward. It depends on the reader knowing the “trick” of figuring out which way is left by holding your hands out in front of you the way J-san would in the comic: The left hand’s thumb and forefinger will form an “L”. Not everyone knows this trick, but that wasn’t what stopped me; It was the fact that D-san, who uses this trick all the time (I’m not sure why), couldn’t figure out the joke.
2) I would need to explain where the Lesser Demon’s co-worker came from. She wasn’t present in the previous comic, so her appearance could be somewhat confusing.
3) The Lesser Demon’s co-worker is not really needed for the mini-arc, so she would be pretty much extraneous for the rest of the mini-arc. On a related note, her presence would force me to draw an extra character every few panels for the rest of the mini-arc, and we all know how lazy I can be.
Other notes on the pencil artwork:
The words “Rant: T-shirt+jeans?” in the center of the image are a reminder for the rant I was intending to write, which was actually used for this update.
Only one of J-san’s hands has been drawn. I was intending to flip the drawing over in Photoshop to make the other hand when assembling to comic, to save drawing time.
Wow. That was a long rant.
EDIT [7/10/2006]: Alright, now I’m going to make this rant longer by presenting:
Results of Nonsense Wars poll #1
Who is your favorite character in:
J-san’s half of Nonsense Wars?
J-san |
|
4 votes |
Chris |
|
3 votes |
The Lesser Demon |
|
3 votes |
The Lesser Demon’s co-worker |
|
2 votes |
D-san |
|
1 vote |
Other |
|
1 vote |
D-san’s half of Nonsense Wars?
J-san |
|
4 votes |
D-san |
|
2 votes |
Young-sensei |
|
2 votes |
Z-Dawg (Mr. Duong) |
|
2 votes |
Chikara |
|
2 votes |
Mad Scientist J-san |
|
1 vote |
Other |
|
1 vote |
Aerith |
|
0 votes |
Total votes: 14
It’s interesting that D-san, who appears in both halves of Nonsense Wars, finished differently in the two halves of the poll. I need to use him in comics more often.
Also, I wasn’t expecting J-san to win both polls. The last time he appeared in D-san’s half was in this comic. (The last time he had a line was in the comic after that one.) As evidenced by the poll results, I consider J-san and Mad Scientist J-san as separate characters. I wonder if people got confused and voted for J-san when they really meant Mad-Scientist J-san…
Anyway, thanks to all who voted! We might have another poll in the future … If I can think of a good question.